An0maly's College Essay Review!

<p>Anomaly, will you read my Short Answer (150 word limit) on an Activity?</p>

<p>And silverturtle you haven’t started yet? That’s suprising.</p>

<p>I’ll probably send mine over sometime. Still playing with a few different rough drafts.</p>

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<p>Not sure what to write about.</p>

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<p>Yes I will.</p>

<p>Just to let you guys know, I have about 8/9 saved in my inbox. I don’t like to rush them and today was a busy day, so I’ll be going through them in the next couple of days. </p>

<p>I didn’t start most of my essays until winter break, so don’t worry people!</p>

<p>^thanks and for the words of relief too. I hope one day a higher power rewards you for your extreme kindness to us</p>

<p>Hey, could you PM me one of your old essays if they are still on hand? I would really like to see what a Yale accepted essay looks like.</p>

<p>If I ever actually get a draft done I will definitely send you it! :D</p>

<p>^^ And ditto what dave93 said.</p>

<p>Thanks for all the Help!!! He really helped me fix up the grammatical errors and gave me his insights.</p>

<p>I will not PM my essays to anyone until they have spent a considerable amount of time thinking over theirs. The problem with looking at old essays is that you get influenced by them and I’d like you all to come up with your own stuff before trying to enhance it or compare it.</p>

<p>After you’ve spent a long time, I’ll be happy to send my commonapp essay over. I don’t send my Yale supplement to anyone because of privacy reasons, but I thought both my essays were solid.</p>

<p>Thanks An0maly for the reads! He’s clearly read a lot of essays and knows what’s up! Also knows ALL about grammar!</p>

<p>well ive actually finished my first drafts of my essays, which i sent a pm to you about. I just want to see how length and content compares.</p>

<p>Thanks! The paragraph write-up is extremely helpful.</p>

<p>Anomaly did a really good job with critiqueing my essay, i agreed with everything he said, and his advice wont go to waste</p>

<p>PMed mine and got an excellent review. I encourage everyone to use this service that An0maly is providing! 100000/10!</p>

<p>An0maly, any idea how long you’ll be providing this service?</p>

<p>I PMed my essay twice, but I’m unsure if you recieved it because it won’t show up in my sent items archive. If you could please clear that up for me, that would be great.</p>

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<p>Until January 15th hopefully. Although I guarantee that my responses will not be as fast as they were in the beginning. I had 25 new messages this morning lol!</p>

<p>@ Bub1029 - I received it (both times) :)</p>

<p>Hopefully you got my PM as well, I’m having the same problem as bub.</p>

<p>^ That confused me too at first, but cc doesn’t store messages in your sent mail unless you click a little box at the bottom of the message when sending it (Store message in sent mail?)</p>