<p>An0maly, I understand that you have been barraged with essay requests, so if you are unable to look at my essay I completely understand. Being a freshmen at Yale is busy =)
You took a look at my essay a while back, and I have greatly revised and shortened it. I tried to send it to you, but your inbox was full.
Yale’s SCEA deadline is Nov 1, and I would love to have some of your feedback on the places I can reduce the length and improve the grammar.
Again, if you can’t, I totally understand. Thank you again for offering this service-your feedback on my first draft was excellent.</p>
<p>I am back in business fellas. Cleared my old PM’s because the latest was about a week old, and I figured people have really revised their drafts.</p>
<p>Fire away!</p>
<p>wow i just saw this thread after like two months. I’d just like to say thank you An0maly for helping me to realize i needed to start over my essay i had written.</p>
<p>and just on cue I have a new essay that needs revising. sending it in two PMs</p>
<p>thanks ahead of time!</p>
<p>Wow, you’re really great to be doing this! It truly is nice to have an outsider review your essay. I PM’ed mine to you. Thanks again.</p>
<p>hey thanks for doing this again!!!..i just sent you my common app essay…i was also wondering if you could look at some supps too?..anyways thanks again</p>
<p>I can look at supplements, and if they’re short ones [i.e. under 100 words], then label that in the title and I look at them first!</p>
<p>alright cool, i sent two of them your way :D</p>
<p>PMed~your comments are very valuable to me~</p>
<p>I’m sending you mine right now!
Think your approach to critiques would be extremely valuable since I’m really questioning if my essay presents enough of an image of me</p>
<p>hey An0maly! I PMed you my first draft of my Common App Long essay. Thanks in advance for looking at it! :)</p>
<p>Hey i PM’ed you my draft. my College advisor isnt sure about the topic. can you take a look?</p>
<p>PM’d you my first draft of my Pitt essay, thanks a ton!</p>
<p>Sent you mine yesterday. Thanks in advance!</p>
<p>Hey An0maly! I PMed you mine, thanks in advance for doing this!</p>
<p>Sup An0maly. </p>
<p>I PMed you mine, see what you think.</p>
<p>Hey An0maly, PMed mine also…even though there are already 8 people who pmed you today lol
Anyway, thanks in advice!</p>
<p>Hey guys,</p>
<p>One more thing. If you’re applying ED/EA, please LABEL that in the title. I understand that the Nov 1st deadline is approaching soon, so I’d like to cover those before the Jan 1st people, since you have a greater time pressure.</p>
<p>I PM’ed u my essay already. Please critique.</p>
<p>An0maly, I PM’ed you mine two days ago but I didn’t say I have an EA deadline. Thanks</p>