Any beautiful souls out there who would like to help a UC applicant with her essays

hello, I’ve finally finished my UC apps and I am desperately needing a proofreader/commenter.

I’ve asked my teacher but being that he is , I know that he won’t get it back to me before the 30th.
So please, whether you are a student,teacher, parent, please help me out.

If you are a fellow applicant, I will also try to give feedback to yours! Thank you all! :slight_smile: