Any harsh readers willing to critique my essay?

College Essays
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<p>Yeah, pretty self explanatory ^_^
I'd love to trade with someone who also needs some help! :D</p>

2

<p>I’m willing to trAde.</p>

3

<p>Anyone else? :)</p>

4

<p>I’ll trade</p>

5

<p>Kay, sending you a PM now</p>

6

<p>i can do itt</p>

7

<p>bump
mainly looking for people to trade with, it’s safer that way :P</p>