Any parents want to read my quirky/unusual essay?

<p>Wrote a college essay for the lulz and I'm wondering if it'll actually work. I'm looking for some feedback from anyone besides high schoolers on this site. Post below or PM me and I'll PM it to you. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>If you are describing something you’ve written as quirky, it is probably not.</p>

<p>Lots of schools ask for evidence of sense of humor, and in the main, I think parents would give better advice than kids. Lots of kids post here specifically to ask for an adult point of view.</p>