Anyone care to constructively criticize?

<p>I have written the short answer essay on the common app, and have exceeded the word limit by a substantial amount (currently 221 words when the limit is 150). Would anyone be willing to read/edit/help me cut it down? Thanks, I'd really appreciate it.</p>

<p>I don't think 70 or so words over is that big of deal. They'll barely even be able to tell the difference. The word limit is more like an approximate range that you should stay within. Writing a thousand words, moreover, would be stupid. (Which is what I did).</p>

<p>70 words over IS a big deal... cut it down. theyre not going to think of u as much if they think u cant follow directions</p>

<p>I will be glad to look at it. PM me with your email address. If it fits and all shows up when you print-preview your app, the length may be ok. However, it is often possible to cut and usually makes an essay stronger.</p>