<p>Hi. I have just finished writing my essays for U of Chicago. Applying for EA. Many of my friends seen it and says it cliche. It lacks the 'personal touch'. Errmmmm, I really need some help here. Hope you guys can give me some insights on improving my essays. Thanks</p>
<p>I can look over it, if you like. :)</p>
<p>ill look at it send it to me</p>