Anyone care to read my essay?

<p>… and share their thoughts for improvement?</p>

<p>PM me if you do.</p>

<p>erm sure pm</p>

<p>Yeah sure :) Send it to me, I'll add comments and send it back...</p>

<p>PM me please!</p>

<p>Sure. PM me, I can take a look.</p>

<p>I'd love to help you. But what does PM mean?</p>

<p>Private message.</p>

<p>sorry if i don't immediately reply... there are a couple changes I'm looking to make and don't have time for before i send them to you.</p>

<p>Send it over!</p>

<p>I'll give it a read. Glad to share some feedback!</p>

<p>defo just pm it</p>

<p>Pm me would love to critique it. Already applied ED brown</p>