Anyone want to critique my OSU essay I just wrote?

College Essays
1

<p>I'll PM, just say.</p>

2

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

3

<p>pm me
i'll have it read</p>

4

<p>pm me, i read it</p>

5

<p>no problemo</p>

6

<p>i'll read it</p>