Anyone want to read my essay?

[rachelttravis]

<p>This is for one of my UC apps it's an early draft. Feedback is appreciated. I can personal message it to you.</p>

[Orideus]

<p>Please PM! I can hopefully offer some good advice</p>

[Jimmmmmmmm]

<p>Please PM to me also! I am more than happy to read over your essay, and I wish to gain some experience regarding the format of college essays.
Thanks!</p>

[Careful]

<p>I can read it for you! :-)</p>

[theshins]

<p>I’ll read it & critique it!</p>

[AAAcollege]

<p>I can do it</p>

[gotadream]

<p>I love to read it.</p>