<p>Respond and I'll PM you. (That sounds like a threat.)
I'm willing to look at your essay as well, but after reading the stuff I write you might not want me to. :)</p>
<p>I am not a student but a parent. I will read you essay if you PM me. Just want you to know I am most tough critique according to my daughter.</p>
<p>PM me with your topic, essay and an e-mail for me to send it back to you with comments.</p>