Anyone want to read my supplement essay (unfinished)?

<p>I'm halfway done. I haven't really edited anything yet, but I'm not sure if I actually want to use this essay (I chose Michael Jordan). If anyone wants to read it and tell me what they think, PM me.</p>

<p>Hi there. In the same vein, could anybody take a look at my essay and tell me what they think. Please PM me. My topic's Yasser Arafat and im trying to tie in who I am as a person and whatnot as well as a few personal experiences in the West Bank.</p>