<p>hey would you guys like to critique my essay
i really need some input, from Berkeley students</p>
<p>please, anyone interested. in dire need of it</p>
<p>i can read it.</p>
<p>Let me read it. I've gone to the personal statement sessions for UC Berkeley, and spent about 4 hours writing my own. Email me <a href="mailto:dek1986@gmail.com">dek1986@gmail.com</a></p>