Anyone want to read my USC transfer personal statement?

<p>Hey, guys. I just completed a draft for me transfer essay to USC. I'm not exactly sure how long a personal statement should be, but mine is about four paragraphs and 558 words. Here is the prompt:</p>

<p>"The Cinematic Arts personal statement should be a carefully prepared explanation of the applicant's goals, describing any film, television, scholarly, critical or other creative background, as well as career objectives. It should present a clear and accurate picture of the applicant, outline objectives in the field of critical studies and explain how attending the School of Cinematic Arts will help reach these goals."</p>

<p>I'm not sure if mine is too long for a personal statement, but I'm debating on using it for either this prompt or the common app essay on why I want to transfer to USC's School of Cinematic Arts.</p>

<p>If you are willing to read, shoot me a PM. Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>shoot me a pm!</p>