Anyone want to read to read two of my essays and give me feedback?

College Essays
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<p>Title</p>

<p>Thanks a lot guys</p>

<p>Whoa, I just looked at the title. Consider the typo my gimmick :)</p>

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<p>i finished my college apps luckily, and im glad people helped me proofread on here. so i guess ill return the favor. expect me to be done 2 days after you send it to me at the latest.</p>

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<p>Hi, thanks a lot. I sent one of the essays. I’m patching things up on the other and I’ll send it asap!</p>