Anyone willing to help me with my CAS supplement?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Cornell University
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<p>I just want to know if it is a strong essay or not, if not, how would I be able to improve it? </p>

<p>Thanks in Advance!</p>

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<p>PM me. I’m a student who was accepted to Cornell this year for ED. I’ll read over it and send some of my suggestions to you.</p>

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<p>If you would like to PM me, I’ll read it over. I’m a current senior in CAS and have dabbled in peer advising for students at Cornell.</p>

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<p>@mikeyc765</p>

<p>Thanks for the amazing help!!</p>