Anyone willing to offer feedback on my essay?

College Essays
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Just a rough draft, but I thought it would be a nice place to start editing. Please let me know if you would kindly be willing to do so.

Thanks

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Sure!

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ill read it!!

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I’ll read it as well. Thanks for commenting on my post by the way!

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I’ll help!

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I’ll have a look :smiley:

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I’ll read your essay and give you some feedback. Can you also read my essay? Thank you so much!

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I think I can read yours. Can you read mime as well？