Anyone willing to read a essay I wrote for an application and tell me what you think?

College Essays
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<p>Let me know in the comments!</p>

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<p>bump</p>

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<p>Send it my way and I’ll give some feedback. Hope I can help.</p>

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<p>PM me, and I’ll give feed back.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it as well.</p>

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<p>can you read it now?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I need someone to help me with mine too</p>