Anyone willing to read a Umich honors essay??

<p>Topic -
Is there an issue, a question, or an idea that fascinates you? Tell us what fascinates you and why.</p>

<p>I've written it in 2 VERYY similar ways (pretty much just different organization) the content is almost the exacty same</p>

<p>Anyone willing to read both/give HARSH critisism/tell me which style is better organized.</p>

<p>Thanks!!
Preferably no 08</p>