Anyone willing to read my HSHSP (MSU high school research program) essay?

I was wondering if anyone would be willing to check if I responded to the prompt sufficiently enough, as I feel as though I’m missing something.

This is my best bet for research, since it’s in my state and I’ve been to MSU for other camps and truly enjoyed it.

Thanks!

I’d be willing to give you feedback, just PM me!

i would be willing to as well just pm me the essay