<p>Prompt #1, pm and I'll email it to you or PM it to you please respond and revise</p>
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<p>no man no. when will you guys learn that essays and personal statements are not to be put up on forums to check “whether its good or not” , especially essays. i mean after youve got accepted you could always post it for us to get inspiration and stuff, but before acceptance? i think not. hope you make it to the schools you aspire. best of luck.</p>