<p>Hi! I'm a senior in HS now worrying about my application essay to MIT (I'm applying early.....deadline is Wednesday....YIKES!). I think i have most of it worked out, and got advice from some people my age, but I was wondering what sort of critiques I would get from an adult audience, perhaps more similar to the type of people that will be reviewing the application. If anyone wouldnt mind, could you please read my essay and tell me your honest opinion? I could use any advice I could get!</p>
<p>(and for personal reasons, I'm not going to post my essay on the boards. I can send it email or PM though if anyone is interested!). Thanks!</p>