<p>Um, hi I was wondering if anyone would like to help me edit and see if my essay is too short. I personally think it's too short and doesn't answer the entire question as well as could be more specific, but i'd like others opinions as well.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to help you! I have extensive experience as a tutor and essay editor, so hopefully I can be a boon to you :)</p>
<p>PM me and I’ll give you my email address so you can send it to me via email.</p>
<p>That’s great, thanks a lot.</p>
<p>I’ll help! PM it over</p>