thank you!!
Remember the litmus test: this essay is supposed to give them a reason to say yes to your application. We want the reader to finish your essay and think: “Now THAT’S a kid I want to meet.”
Now let’s revisit your choices:
- Nope. Not time for true confessions. They don’t want someone whose selling point is that they don’t fit in.
- Maybe. But you’ll want to talk about YOU, not about food. And keep an eye on the eating disorder message.
- How do those characters make you a good applicant for my school?
- Likewise.