Argh !! Urgent help needed

<p>can anyone please be kind enough to have a read and comment my essay?
the deadline is approaching..</p>

<p>I just submitted all of my essays. Now word can describe my happiness. I'll revise your essays if you want.</p>

<p>oh that would be nice!!
which schools are you applying? and can u please not go off untill the end of deadline??
im half way thru and i think im going to be ready in about half an hour</p>