<p>I don't want to sound cliched. Can you look over my response?
I would prefer messaging my response.
Thanks!</p>
<p>I can read it for you, I'm not a current student but I applied ED so my application's already in. Just pm it over and I'll take a look. A word of caution however, I can be a little TOO critical</p>
<p>thanks! I'll send it. Btw, I don't mind if you butcher it.</p>
<p>i'd love to read it.</p>