Can any ACCOUNTANT or MAcc/MBA student/grad read over my personal statement?

<p>Hi there,</p>

<p>I'm a 25 year old applying to an Accounting Masters program. I would really appreciate it if any accountant or MBA student/graduate could be generous enough to read over my personal statement and give me their honest feedback. I only need feedback on the content. I'm not sure if some parts may be extraneous, and I want you to help me decide. The personal statement is only one page, so I imagine that you can do it super quick.</p>

<p>Please help me out! It'll be good karma for you for the new year! Thanks so much. Please post here or PM me.</p>