Can anyone lend a hand?

<p>I need help in revising my essay for English class. Can anyone help me me edit it? I feel that there is something wrong wtih the tense I am using. It keeps switching back and forth from present to past, and I can't distinguish it. If you want to help me, please post and I will PM it to you. Thanks.</p>

<p>if you want to PM it to me, i'll take a look at it this weekend.</p>