Can anyone PLEASE help me proofread/revise my personal statement for uc?

<p>Hello! I was wondering if you can read my personal statement for the UC app and tell me if there is anything you liked, disliked, agree with, disagree with... anything wrong... etc. Please help me proofread and make my statement the best possible!</p>

<p>Sorry to be asking this... but please message me back before friday because of the approaching deadline :)) thank you for understanding</p>

<p>Pm me or post here and i will pm you ! Again, thanks in advance!</p>

<p>I can read yours too</p>

<p>i will read it just pm me !</p>