Can anyone please read my CAS Essay??

<p>I just need some advice... =))</p>

<p>send it over dude</p>

<p>(i’m ED acceptee)</p>

<p>thanksss i just sent it</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read your essay.</p>

<p>go ahead and send it (PM) : D id be happy to proofread it</p>

<p>PM, I can give you some advice</p>

<p>Submitted mine a couple days ago, I’d be willing to provide some feedback as well :)</p>

<p>ok pm me…i’m applying to College of Engg not CAS</p>