Can anyone proofread my Common App essay?

Hi. just wanted to see if there was anyone who would be so kind as to proofread my CA essay. Thanks!

I can try if you want. I am a parent.

Thank you! Appreciate it :slight_smile:
Should I DM it to you?

I too can read it and can provide you feedback if you like. I am a parent and my daughter is in Junior year.

Sure