Can anyone proofread my 'most influencial person' essay?

Colleges & Universities A-Z Princeton University
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<p>Hi,
was just hoping anyone could proofread- particularly to analyze the grammar and lanaguage aspect of it, just before I press submit!</p>

<p>However, read another post in which someone asked for a critique and even tho a lot of people agreed, no one sent him a reply, so hope you'd be willing to do this job for me in time! =D</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>And happpy new year! =D</p>

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<p>Sure.Just PM me.</p>

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<p>SENT! Can’t wait to hear what you’ve got to say!</p>

<p>Anymore takers??</p>

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<p>bumpppp!!!</p>

<p>BTW, still waiting for your reply USApplicant!</p>

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<p>hey, PM me! i can ask my brother in Pton who can proofread ur essay! :)</p>

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<p>sure send it over</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look for you</p>

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<p>Unfortunately its been sent already, but thankyou very very much =D</p>