As title, I really hope someone could read my essay and give me some constructive advices. If anyone can read my essay, please comment below! Thank You! :-*
Sure, I’m currently a freshmen at NYU :). I can read it for u
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Sure just sent mine into NYU, would love to check out a fellow applicants!
I can read it for you too 
Was accepted ED1 to NYU and would love to help!
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Thank you all for helping, I had already submitted!
MAY THE FORCE BE WITH US :)>- good luck~