can anyone read my uc essays?

Applying to College
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<p>ill read it too</p>

<p><a href="mailto:mightymouse014@yahoo.com">mightymouse014@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>if you'd still like more feedback (possibly after you edit your essay after all the suggestions) you can feel free to PM me.</p>