Can anyone read my "what matters" essay?

<p>Hello</p>

<p>I wrote my "what matters to you, and why?" essay today. It took me about 2 hours approximately, so it's pretty bad. It's my first draft though! I can pm it to whoever wishes to review it :)</p>

<p>I would be happy to review it.</p>

<p>I can review it as well :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to review :)</p>

<p>Yay count me in too:)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to as well!</p>

<p>Count me in! Just send me a PM & I’ll be glad to look over it</p>

<p>I’d love to read it!</p>

<p>PM it to me. I think I’m the only old person on this thread so it’ll give you another perspective (I have a daughter in college).</p>

<p>Sure! PM me!</p>

<p>Send it over :)</p>

<p>Send it to me too please! Good luck!</p>

<p>sure! 10char</p>

<p>I’ll take a look :)</p>

<p>I’d be glad to read it over as well. PM it to me please.</p>

<p>Sure. PM it over.</p>

<p>I’d like to look it. :)</p>