Can anyone read over my barnard supplement?

<p>if you’ve already been accepted, or you are a current student, or a parent of one.</p>

<p>i know they’re really bad since i’m not the best writer and I have trouble expressing myself.
i don’t know what the adcom looks for in the supplement, but my sister told me my answers are too generic.</p>

<p>anyone?
Thanks :)</p>

<p>Yes, ma’am! PM them on over.</p>

<p>thank you so much!!! i really really appreciate it!! be as brutal as you wish! :)</p>

<p>i’d be glad to read them over, too</p>

<p>pm me and I’ll do my best</p>

<p>pm me, ill help</p>

<p>pm me and i’ll read it for you :)</p>

<p>I’d love to read it; I’m not a student there, I am a HS sophomore, but I love to write and I would love to read it</p>