Can anyone revise my essay for Harvard?

[Krazieh0bo]

<p>The essay is in final draft, and I need someone to comment on it</p>

[umadbro]

<p>Sure. I’l take a look over it. Shoot me a message with your essay.</p>

[Lily2015]

<p>I’ll read it if you want.</p>

[gotmilk]

<p>I will read it over.</p>