<p>I just want some feedback, editing isn't necessary nor is any great length of work, I really need simply need some opinions on how my essay is. </p>
<p>It's a 516 word essay and I wrote it about four hours before I my turn-in deadline and I need it to be better and actually edited for the other colleges I'm just going to recycle it for. </p>
<p>Please help me, it's driving me crazy!</p>