Can more graduated seniors do "actual results" threads?

SAT I (breakdown): 2140 (670 M, 670 CR, 800 W 10 essay)
ACT:
SAT II: 800 Math 2, 780 US, 720 Math 1
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 94 (3.8)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
AP (place score in parenthesis): Lang 4, US 4
IB (place score in parenthesis):
Senior Year Course Load: Calc II, Lit, AP Macroeconomics, Bio, Gov
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): none

Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Varsity Soccer Captain, Club soccer captain, NHS President, MUN (Best delegate once, honorable mention twice), Amnesty Int’l., Debate, Outside Program (5-year commitment), Movie Club, and others
Job/Work Experience: Soccer Ref
Volunteer/Community service: About 100 hrs (NYT article written about me)
Summer Activities: Abroad homestay, Travel Soccer, Outside program
Essays: CA - Superb.
Teacher Recommendation: Both were “best in career”
Counselor Rec: She loves me and my family
Additional Rec:
Interview: Good
Other
State (if domestic applicant): NY(C)
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Small Public
Ethnicity: Black
Gender: M
Income Bracket: $100,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM
Reflection
Strengths: Essays, Personality
Weaknesses: Horrid midyear grades.

Accepted: Duke (Likely), Vanderbilt (early-write), Macalester (early-write), WUSTL, Northwestern, Carnegie Mellon, Syracuse, a lot of SUNYs and CUNYs.

Waitlisted: UChicago, Penn (Wharton)

Rejected: Harvard, Princeton, Cornell

My Profile:
SAT I: 2150 (740 Math, 720 CR, 690 W)
SAT II: 780 Chem, 770 Spanish, 760 USH
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.75
Weighted GPA (out of 6.0): 4.8
Rank: 17/551
AP: USH(5) Chem(4) SpanLang(4) EnvSci(5)
AP (After applying): BC Calc(5) Human Geo(5) Bio(5) EngLit(4)
Senior Year Course Load: 4 APs first semester, 2 second (due to graduation reqs). 3 A’s, 1 B in AP EngLit in first semester, straight A’s second semester.

Subjective:
State: NC
School Type: Large Public
Ethnicity: Hispanic (White)
Gender: Male
Parent Income: Over $250k combined- NO NEED.
Major Awards: AP Scholar
Extracurriculars: Varsity Cross Country, Varsity Indoor and Spring Track - pseudocaptain in both- acted as captain without official title due to captain doing more intensive workouts than the rest of the team.
Job/Work Experience: NONE
Volunteer/Community service: Some, mostly roadside cleanups and helping inner-city kids.
Essays: good, thoughtful, my voice came through, showed my passions in common app essays and interests in supplements
Recommendations: Didn’t read them, assume they were good.
Interview: Duke and Stanford interviewers liked me, but colleges didn’t put much weight in them. Both took about 90 minutes.

Notes: Moved from Philly area, PA to RTP area of NC the summer before junior year. It prevented me from having leadership positions, limited what I could do that summer, and I had to adjust a lot. Course load messed up due to having to take state-mandated unnecessary courses. Unable to take AP English Language junior year due to it being paired with AP US History, which I took Soph. year in PA.

Accepted: UNC Chapel Hill Honors (attending as Class of 2017), UVA, UMich (legacy for graduate 2x, born in Ann Arbor), NC State, Wake Forest, UMiami (23k annual scholarship)

Waitlisted: Duke, Rice (Invited to Vision 2013 (likely letter equivalent)- did not attend because I would lose exemption from senior final exams)

Rejected: Penn (undergrad legacy, parents donated money 2x- was offered interview and declined lol), Stanford

SAT I: 2360 (800 M, 800 V, 760 W)
SAT II: 780 Math II, 800 Chem
Unweighted GPA: 3.89/4.00
Rank: 7/280ish

Good teacher recs and solid extracurriculars (varsity athlete in multiple sports, part time job all throughout HS, clubs, etc.). Essay could’ve been better, I suppose.

State: CA

Applied: Stanford, Duke, Harvard, Yale, Caltech, MIT, Berkeley, UCLA, Princeton, Northwestern, Michigan

Accepted: Stanford, MIT, Berkeley, UCLA, Northwestern, Michigan, Caltech
Waitlisted: Yale
Rejected: Duke, Harvard, Princeton

It was a tough decision, but I’m attending Stanford this fall. I’ve always pictured myself at either Duke or Stanford. Thank you, Duke, for making the decision for me! haha

SAT I: 2190 (760 CR, 780 M, 650 W)
SAT II: 800 Math II, 730 Physics, 750 World History
UW GPA: 3.4
IB Diploma student (found out I got it today :slight_smile:

State: OR
Senior Classes: IB Physics HL, IB Math HL, IB Mandarin Year 5, IB English HL, IB History of the Americas HL, IB Anthropology SL, IB ToK
ECs: President of Music and Asian Club, Treasurer of Math Club, members of a bunch of other clubs including MUN, Robotics, Stats, etc. Piano + Guitar, Art (3rd in state for a competition), did some crew and muay thai

Applied (all engineering): UIUC, UW, UMich, OSU, Purdue, Georgia Tech, UCLA, Berkeley, UCSD, UCD, RPI, Cornell, Princeton
Accepted: UIUC (honors), UW (no direct admit), OSU, Purdue, RPI, UCSD
Waitlisted: Georgia Tech (didn’t take spot on WL)
Denied: Rest

Decision: I will be attending the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign in the fall as a EE major!

Thoughts: Wasn’t too surprised being rejected by alot of the schools, especially since my GPA is so low. Kinda wish I wasn’t so lazy with homework, but its too late to change that now. Still pretty happy about going to UIUC.

Did you REALLY get into wharton with that application…incredible. do you have legacy?

Just posting this so I can read this thread later without subscribing. Great thread!

SAT: 2100 (790 math, 660 reading, 650 writing, 7 essay)
ACT: 31 composite (30 english, 34 math, 29 reading, 32 science, 6 writing, 26 combined english/writing)
SATII: Math II 710, physics 750, US history 730
unweighted GPA: 94.24 (school doesn’t weight, 100 point scale, through first semester of senior year)
state: NY
rank: unknown but probably top 10-15% (or better) of 752
recommendations from Latin I-III and calc BC teachers

Senior Classes: AP Physics C, Honors Creative Writing, AP Macroeconomics, Game Programming (post-AP computer science), AP Latin, Multivariable Calculus (post-AP)

JUNIOR YEAR AP SCORES:
US History: 3
Calculus BC: 5 (AB subscore 5)
Computer Science A: 5
SENIOR YEAR AP SCORES:
Physics C Mechanics: 5
Physics C E&M: 5
Latin: 4
Macroeconomics: 4

Awards (unfortunately, these both came after my college apps were due): Maureen O’Donnell Oxford Classical Dictionary Award (four gold medals on the National Latin Exam), AIME qualifier.
However, I did have three NLE gold medals on three exams prior to submitting my college applications.
Also AP scholar (should be AP scholar with distinction after this year).

Extracurriculars: Juilliard Pre-College for four years (composition; got A’s in all of my classes), Latin Club three years (treasurer for junior and senior year), Math Bulletin for three years (but it kind of dissolved in senior year…), Math Team three years (dropped in senior year because it conflicted with Game Programming), Jazz Band four years (but it was no longer in my schedule senior year because it conflicted with AP Latin).

Applied: MIT (early action), Princeton, University of Chicago, Carnegie Mellon University, Drexel University, Oberlin College, SUNY Binghamton (early action), SUNY Stony Brook, University of New Hampshire

Accepted: Binghamton, Stony Brook (University Scholar), University of New Hampshire, Drexel University (Pennoni honors college), Carnegie Mellon School of Fine Arts (music - composition)

Wait Listed: University of Chicago, Carnegie Mellon School of Computer Science, Oberlin College (eventually denied by Chicago and Oberlin, and rejected my spot on the wait list for CMU)

Denied: MIT (deferred, then denied), Princeton, Carnegie Institute of Technology (part of CMU)

My Decision: Binghamton (cheapest option by a few thousand dollars per year), majoring in Computer Science. I got enough aid from them to not take out any loans! (for freshman year at least)

Thoughts:

  • I wanted to go to MIT but I guess that’ll have to wait for a few years…
  • I was honestly surprised that I was rejected from so many schools… I feel like I could’ve at least gotten into ONE of my top three. (MIT, Princeton, Chicago)
  • Carnegie Mellon didn’t give me nearly enough financial aid. Didn’t even come close to meeting my EFC, even if I were to take loans out from them.

SAT: 2330
ACT: 35
GPA: 4.5
APs: Took 9, got 5’s in all
City: Surabaya, Indonesia
ECs: NHS, STUCO, Varsity volleyball(Captain 3 years), Varsity Swimming, Varsity Badminton
Community Service - Lots and lots and lots of volunteer work
Work - Internship at biopharmaceutical company making cancer medicine

Accepted - Berkeley, Caltech, Boston U, Johns Hopkins, Loyola Marymount, UPenn, UBC, USC, UCLA, UCSD, Stanford, UC Irvine
Rejected - MIT, Harvard, Cornell, Columbia

Decision - Stanford Class of 2017 <3 easy decision. Stanford’s been my dream for a decade

Do have any fundraising tips?? I need it for my club… Thanks!!!

I agree with the request.

ACT: 32 C (35 M, 33 E, 31 R, 30 S, 8 W)
SAT: N/A
GPA: 4.00 UW (school doesn’t weight)
Class Rank: Top 10%
(I was really #2/300, but school doesn’t “officially” rank until graduation)

High School Courses: 3 AP (Chemistry - 4, Government - 4, Statistics - 5)
7 Dual-Enrollment, numerous honors
Toughest schedule available

Extracurricular: Varsity Tennis Captain (3rd in State - 10th, 8th in State - 11th, 5th in
State - 12th)
Eagle Scout (6 years in BSA)
DECA (qualified for nationals twice - Business Finance and SBE)
National Honor Society President (12th)
Active member of church (will be serving two-year mission soon prior
to beginning college, 4-year seminary grad.)

Volunteer: 300+ Hours (sister with Down Syndrome - focused on Special Needs
Organizations)
Job Experience: None (I ran 19-20 hour days during high school and didn’t have time)

Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income: < $150K (no FA)
State: WA
School: Medium Public (1300 students)

Essays: Good, not great
Recommendations: Great (One from Calculus I and II teacher, one from AP Gov)

Applied (All Engineering Schools):
University of Michigan - Ann Arbor (Legacy, EA)
Brigham Young University - Provo (Legacy)
Washington University in St. Louis
Vanderbilt University
Duke University
Stanford University
Cornell University

Accepted:
University of Michigan (Will attend after two-year mission)
Brigham Young University (Half-tuition scholarship)

Waitlisted:
Washington University in St. Louis (didn’t accept spot)
Cornell University (didn’t accept spot)

Rejected:
Duke University (was top choice, but didn’t apply ED for financial reasons)
Stanford University
Vanderbilt University

Thoughts:
I was rather surprised at Vanderbilt and Cornell, after getting accepted to Michigan early, especially considering that Michigan is generally regarded a better engineering school than both. I thought my essays could have showed a little better interest in each school I applied to; however, my Michigan essays demonstrated VERY strong interest. It probably didn’t help that I put biomed as my preferred major at Duke, and I had little chance at Stanford to begin with. WashU waitlists many people, so I wasn’t surprised there, either.

ACT: 33 C
SAT: 2220 (1530 M/CR)
GPA: 4.3 W 3.3-3.5 UW (Can’t remember exact)
Class Rank: Top 20%

High School Courses: 10 AP, IB Diploma Candidate, total of 4 non-honors courses, as well as extra courses before school, and after school fine-arts credit

Extracurricular: Academic Team Captain (12th, numerous awards as well at state level)
At time of Apps, finishing Eagle Scout (explained my project to show I was almost done) (6 years in BSA, Senior Patrol Leader, multiple significant leadership roles, Order of the Arrow (BSA Honors Society))
Forensics - gained enough NFL points for rank of Distinction
Youth Red Cross - Significant time spent planning events, and executing them
Cultural Dance - Choreographed and led 12th, choreographed since 9th, doing since 4th
NHS, Interact Clubs.
Cello- Part of prestigious local Youth Orchestra (difficult to get in, member from 9th -11th)
Martial Arts - Instructor in one type, learned a second type as well
Founding member of Breakdancing and German Clubs (president of German)
Member of school’s robotics and programming team

Volunteer: 400+ Hours (150 for IB CAS)

Ethnicity: Did not specify
Gender: Male
Income: no FA
State: SC
School: Small Public (>150 students in graduating class)

Essays: Amazing (I write really well)
Recommendations: Amazing (One from AP/IB Physics, One from AP/IB Chem, one from AP/IB English)

Applied: Georgia Tech(stretch, for Industrial Engineering), University of South Carolina(both stretch(honors) and fallback, for International Business and GSCOM), Clemson (Fallback for Engineering, non-specific)

Accepted:
USC-Honors(Significant Financial aid) Clemson(Significant financial aid)

Thoughts:
I was originally planning to apply to other colleges, such as UMich but decided against it after getting into USC honors(found out mid December). It is ranked number one both for the honors program, and for International Business (one of my majors, and guaranteed spot for Honors students), cheap, and nearby so I didn’t feel the need to apply to schools that would be more expensive and not worth the trouble. Also, USC has a selective program that lets me spend two years in Hong Kong, an opportunity that couldn’t be matched anywhere else, so I’m quite happy with my results. To be honest I’m surprised I got into either program, as the average student has a significantly higher GPA (UW) than mine.
(Btw, the USC app was killer, 8 essay supplement for Honors!!!)
On Clemson and G-Tech:
Clemson has a good program (got into Honors as well) but it would of been a VERY bad fit for me as business was my main passion. Similarly, G-Tech has a very demanding curriculum for Industrial Engineering, and I most likely would of gotten bored.

“Essays: Amazing (I write really well)”
"and I most likely would of gotten bored. "

I find this amusing.

This thread is really helpful!
Could you guys maybe say the topics of your essays, if that isn’t too personal?

SAT: 2020 (620 R, 690 M, 710 W)
GPA: 4.13 W
Class does not rank

High School Courses:
-All honors every year
-AP Chemistry (Junior Year)
-AP Psychology, AP Calculus BC, AP Spanish Lang, AP Envi. Sci. (Senior Year)

Extracurricular/Volunteer:
-400+ hours of volunteer service
-After-school tutoring job junior and senior year
-Nature Center Volunteer
-Counselor In Training for two summers
-New Orleans Service Project
-Christmas Party Volunteer for underprivileged kids
-Town Clean up Volunteer

Ethnicity: Caucasian
Gender: Male
Income: Middle Class-Upper Middle ($200,000+)
State: CT
School: Large Public

Essays: Gramatically Flawless, Insightful, well-written, passionate (especially for the school-specific supplemental essays)
Recommendations: I am assuming my counselor rec was good (I gave her a lot of information about myself). I got two teacher recs (one from my english teacher senior year who I had for two different subjects concurrently and one from my spanish teacher from both junior and senior year). English Rec is probably better than the spanish rec.

Applied: UIUC, IU, OSU, JMU, several UC’s, NYU, Michigan, Uconn, Tulane, BU, George Washington ($30,000 scholarship), Fordham ($15,000 scholarship), Northeastern
Accepted: UIUC, IU, OSU, JMU, UCSD, UCSB, Uconn, Tulane, BU, GW, Fordham
Waitlisted: Northeastern
Rejected: UCLA, Berkeley, NYU, Michigan

Attending: GW

Thoughts:
I definitely applied to far too many schools not knowing where in the world I wanted to attend, but I could not be more pleased with the decision I made. It was certainly the most feasible decision financially for me and fortunately, my choice holds a great academic reputation as well. I spent a lot of time on my supplemental essays (especially for all of my reach schools–I thought those essays would get me in). Although my GW essay was very good, I thought my essays for NYU and Michigan far surpassed GW’s in quality (which just goes to show that the objective part of the application plays a much larger role than the subjective).

@Violinist143
Here are the topics I wrote on, and how I responded. Hope this gives you some ideas for your own college essays! I abbreviated most of the topics to there main point as each question had lots of unnecessary fluff, the exception being the questions from the business school at USC.
For USC-Columbia and Honors College:
Which academic or personal achievement best showcased my abilities?:
I managed to say that all of my personal achievements did, and showed how each of them made me into who I am.

Which academic or personal achievement is most significant and why?
I talked about choreographing a dance, and making it the best one we’ve ever done.
(Doesn’t sound great, but the essay explains its personal significance to me)

Top 20 books I’ve read over the last year and which was the most impacting.
(I listed a couple of series and books I read, but as I was doing this app the night before it was do, and only had 2 hours to do all of these essays I skipped over the second part of the prompt. (Which probably hurt my scholarship money))

Discuss your depth of involvement in a activity that is of greatest significance to you.
I talked about my involvement with my Boy Scout Troop, and my role in the troop, as well as what I’d done to change it and make it better in various leadership roles and my Eagle Scout project.

Discuss your most significant leadership role.
Talked about my role as captain of the Academic Team.

If there was a parallel universe and everything about it was the exact same except for one surprising thing about me what would it be?
I kind of stretched the meaning on this one and said I would have the ability to make a clone of myself. I then discussed various benefits of the clone.

There was also two areas, one was a personal statement, and the other was about why I chose USC.

USC-Columbia, Business School Cohort Program:

Describe your previous Chinese Language and cultural study (if any).
I talked about reading the Art of War by Sun Tzu and how I studied its relevance to business. I also described my coverage of news regarding the region.

Describe any previous abroad experiences (highlighting Asian travel if any). If you have not yet been abroad, describe any experiences you have had in different cultural settings:
I described various experiences I had abroad. (Kinda obvious I know)

Why are you interested in the IBCE program? How will this program and a degree in International Business from the Moore School of Business help will you reach your career goals?
Talked about three main areas, Chinese culture, a global view of Supply Chain Management(a area I’m quite interested in), and the networking and unique opportunities offered.

Based on your knowledge of China, what do you see as the differences between Hong Kong and Mainland China in regards to business, politics, and/or socio-cultural issues?

I answered the question based on trends i noticed through my research of news articles.

These were all pretty straight forward questions so there wasn’t much creativity needed. There was a 3 minute video presentation as well, it required me to brand my self with 3-4 key words, and then describe a situation when my values and culture were different from the norms around me. This sounds easy enough, but 3 minutes goes by REALLY fast. I believe I talked about my high-school and how the ‘normal’ populace is much less refined, and for the lack of a better word, ghetto, vs. the more intellectual and well off magnet students.
Clemson:
Just a short personal statement for the main app

Honors:
What experience distinguishes you from others?
Boy Scouts again

What is a course topic you would submit for a new course? How would you convince others from various majors to take it?
I talked about programming Android phones.

College gives you an opportunity to grow, what is one opportunity you’ve had to grow?
I talked about my AP Physics class, specifically my amazing and quirky teacher and how he taught us. I compared the relationships between gravity field equations as well as electrical, and magnetic field equations and how these comparisons helped me view the world around me differently.

Georgia Tech:
Personal Statement

Letter to Future roommate, using a personal story to give insight.
Talked about an amazing backpacking trip I went on, and the priceless experiences I had on it.

Hope this helps, and if someone wants the actual essays NO I will not post them on here, but you can PM if you have any questions regarding apps or essays.

Son’s stats:

SAT: 2120
ACT: 29
GPA: 3.8
APs: European History: 3, Calculus AB: 5, Statistics: 5

IB: English HL: 5, Spanish SL: 7, History of Americas HL: 3, ITGS: 4, Chemistry HL: 3, Math SL: 7. (Only ITGS and Math results were available to the schools applied to)

City: Roseville, CA
ECs: limited to CAS hours for IB diploma

Accepted - UC Riverside
Rejected - UC Davis, UCSB, UCLA, UCSD
Waitlisted (and ultimately rejected): Cal Poly SLO, Wisconsin

Decision - UCR

Yes please do that.

ACT: 35
GPA: 3.9 /4. UW
APs: CHEM, Spanish, English Comp, English Lit, Physics B, BC Calc, Psych,
Took 2 languages (Spanish, Chinese);
Varsity tennis
Concertmaster JR & SR
Winner concerto competitions
CYSO
Played violin at nursing homes weekly, for 3 years
Very good essays and recommendations
Applied Michigan EA, Wisconsin EA, Johns Hopkins ED

Accepted all 3

Attending JHU

Accepted: Northeastern University (Safety School), Villanova University, Boston College
Waitlisted: William & Mary
Rejected: Harvard, Princeton
Attending: Boston College

ACT:30
Rank:22/99
GPA: 94/100
GPA Weighted:4.15
NHS President, Student Council Secretary, Campus Ministry, Varsity Soccer/Cross Country, other meaningless clubs such as Pep Club, Social Studies Club and I was a student ambassador. I had great letters of recommendation. I had 100 service hours.
I was given an Army ROTC scholarship to Boston College and Villanova if I were to get accepted to either.
Private School
State: Alabama
Size: 400 Students