<p>I will read and critique it if you still need help. PM me.</p>
<p>I would love to take a look at it especially since I have nothing to do now. Email it to <a href=“mailto:baruas@bc.edu”>baruas@bc.edu</a></p>
<p>Yes, I will read your essay and critique it. Email it over to <a href="mailto:jameskim0606■■■■■■■■■■■■">jameskim0606■■■■■■■■■■■■</a>. I’ll gladly look over it 
~ Cheers from James.</p>
<p>sure, PM it over</p>
<p>PM it to me, ill critique.</p>
<p>just a note to the OP, i’d be wary of sending it to people who have <50 posts 
as some of the people on here have been …
but i’ll read if you still need a critiquer :)</p>
<p>I love how everyone jumps on a “Harvard” post. That said, PM it to me. Check my post history if it’ll help you sleep at night.</p>
<p>if u need another opinion, pm it over!</p>
<p><a href="mailto:jennychocho111@gmail.com">jennychocho111@gmail.com</a>
glad to look it over for you</p>
<p>same here, i’d love to. i AM a 2014er (just telling u so u dont have to check haha) but i most definately am NOT applying to harvard (yale ftw…jussayin), and i’m pretty much done mine.</p>
<p>not applying to any ivy league cept cornell so u can pm me too</p>
<p>I just want to say that I don’t think this is really the OP’s essay. I just read it and I swear it’s from the 50 Successful Harvard Essays book! I still went through with critiquing it b/c it helps me, but if you’re wary of wasting time…</p>
<p>just pm me. ;)</p>
<p>sure, no problem :)</p>
<p>pm me and i’ll tell you what i think</p>
<p>I’ll read it. My sister goes to Harvard (not lying) and I don’t have a shot there, however, I can write a damn good essay. So PM :D</p>
<p>Don’t send it to people just because they gave you their email address. They might steal your idea, especially since you’re applying to Harvard.</p>
<p>pm the essay over</p>
<p>pm me
I’ll take a look at it! I took a writing program at Harvard during the summer.</p>
<p>oops. here is my email:
<a href="mailto:begamail26■■■■■■.com">begamail26■■■■■■.com</a></p>
<p>Sure; PM it over! I’m in college and it’s summer so I have nothing to do. :)</p>