Can someone help me with my American University Women Scholarship essay?

Hi,

I’m applying to the American University Women (AUW) Scholarship and I would like some feedback on my essay. Can someone just post their email below so that I can send you my essay to read?

Thanks.

Hi -

I will give you feedback, but I won’t post my email address (and I don’t think others should either). Send it to me via PM and I can review/comment.

Best of luck to you