Can someone look over my common app essay?

[sa1833]

I would really appreciate it, I’m so anxious about college admissions.

[nikkifay]

I would love to! Email it to nikashirman@gmail.com

[silverpurple]

I would be happy to look. Would u like to message me?

[collegeboy98]

Message me!

[jakijakijaki]

I’ll read yours if you read mine:3

[zucchiniO78]

I can help!