Can someone please critique my supplements?

Colleges and Universities A-Z New York University
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<p>The meaning is basically implicit from the title of my thread...</p>

<p>...BUT I have a problem: Either my supplements are really good, or they are completely off the mark, and I need you guys to make that judgement call for me. I have not been on this thread at all the couple of weeks so that I can get this done right the first time. I am basically finished, and need to do some tweaking, but can some people PLEASE read my supplements?</p>

<p><em>I apologize, but no 2014's like me, and I don't feel comfortable with giving out my supplements to members with a low post-count, sorry for the inconvenience.</em></p>

<p>I will PM you, and please PM back whenever you have time! :)</p>

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<p>i already PMed you with my nyu email address.</p>

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<p>you can PM me your essay with the prompt and i’ll offer you some feed back</p>

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<p>You’re welcome to PM them to me.</p>

<p>I’m part of the class of '12.</p>

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<p>Oh crap, I still have one more left to do, give me a few days, maybe two until I PM all of you! Crap!</p>

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<p>Hey NP can you PM me? I would just like to see how awesome they are. :)</p>

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<p>Can someone PM about reading my essay/supplements. It would REALLY help out. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>missamericanpie,
when I’m ready, do you think you could read mine as well?</p>

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<p>Dudeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee</p>

<p>I am so behind, and I have so much school work!</p>

<p>Commonapp essay and 2 more NYU supplement left :((((((((((</p>

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<p>Come on NP you can do it!</p>

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<p>How long are your supplements?
Are you using all 500 words??</p>

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<p>Hey, PM to me i’ll critique it :slight_smile:
I’m not applying NYU.</p>

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<p>I will read them! Im applying to. It would be nice to see how someone else is writing them. Then Ill send you mine as well.</p>

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<p>and @organic1992. I am not mine range from 16 words (poem) - 415 words</p>

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<p>u can PM in to me too : ]</p>

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<p>ZOMGGGGGG, pressure!</p>

<p>To all CCers I will post it to every single person on this board by the end of next week… I PROMISE. I cannot believe I am behind, but I still need to do one more supplement, and do a little of my common application! Sorry!! I really need your help though guys!</p>

<p>( I mean PM to everyone who I sense is fit.)</p>

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<p>the common app limit is 500 characters, not words…</p>

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<p>^ hahaha you think I don’t know? All I need to do is editing, that is it. And re-reading and thinking like an admissions officer while reading etc…</p>

<p>Everything is done, I am just stalling for time. As Riva once said: “Time is the Healer.”</p>