Can Someone Read My Common App ESSAY?

<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I finished writing my common app essay and I want some feedback on it. </p>

<p>Can someone read my essay and give me insightful feedback?</p>

<p>I will also be bothering you with my supplements :P</p>

<p>PS. To prevent plagiarism, I will be "little" selective in who to send my essay.</p>

<p>ill read it if you’re willing, PM me</p>

<p>I dont mind reading it</p>

<p>i will read it!i already sent in my apps</p>

<p>I am REALLY sorry for all of you :[
I trust all of you and I really appreciate your offers.</p>

<p>However, I am looking for graduated students who are currently in prestigious college or in career. T.T Please do not take it offensively. I really LOVE you all and thank you : ]</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you can PM me :)</p>