Can someone read my Common App essay?

<p>I'm not sure it's anywhere close to Ivy-worthy. I need honesty...</p>

<p>bumptenchar</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you want. I’m a senior too, if that bothers you</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I can read and give feedback!</p>

<p>I can read it as well!</p>

<p>Ill give it a read, Pm me I guess</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>