Can someone read my essay on Korean-Pop music?

<p>It's for a William & Mary supplemental essay. </p>

<p>Beyond your impressive academic credentials and extracurricular accomplishments, what else makes you unique and colorful? We know that
nobody fits neatly into 500 words or less, but you can provide us with some suggestion of the type of person you are. Anything goes! Inspire us,
impress us, or just make us laugh. Think of this optional opportunity as show and tell by proxy and with an attitude. For additional context, check
out the William & Mary Admission Office video message at wm.edu/admissionvideo.</p>