Can someone read my essay?

<p>If you'd like to read my essay and critique it, post below and I'll PM you it. I'm not a wrong writer and would like some others to help me. This grade will be HUGE for my overall grade and I need to get a 95+. </p>

<p>Also, Can I raise my score from an 1800 to a 2300+ in 10 months?</p>

<p>Send it to me, I’ll take a glance</p>