Can someone read my essay?

<p>I've written a diversity essay, but would like a second look at it and some constructive criticism on it. I've tried writing 5 different essays, and I'm particularly proud of this one. Would anyone please help me?</p>

<p>sure. pm it to me</p>

<p>Sure, send it over.</p>

<p>Sure I’ll give it a read. PM me!</p>

<p>Sure pm me</p>