can someone read my essay?

I need some serious critiques preferably a experienced essay reader but any feedback would be helpful!!!

I can read it. Would you like me to PM you?

sure @WeLoveLyman

If you’re willing to let a fellow student read your essay, I can do it. Feel free to pm me. :slight_smile:

The common recommendation is to only send your essay to an adult with a long posting history.

@sofiaamachuca16 thank you!

Please do NOT send your essay to a student.

For starters, he or she has no experience in this field.

Secondly, you don’t know him or her. Your best friend would be a far better choice if for some reason you want a peer critique, though I can’t imagine what that reason might be.