Can someone read my extended essay?

It’s kind of weird… and also too long. I read somewhere online that the extended essay should be about 1000 words, but now I’m just learning that it should in fact be about 500. My essay is currently about 750 words. Can anyone tell me if my essay idea at all works, and perhaps ideas on where to cut? Thanks!

I can help you out

bump?

I can if you want

I just finished editing mine today, can help ya out if you want :slight_smile:

I’m willing to take a look

If it makes you feel any better, mine ended up being 1330 words. I applied ED so I don’t know whether or not that hurt me, but I did the “historical figure mash-up” prompt so it kind of warranted a longer short story.